Fifty-Eight Thousand Words, Just For You

I have uploaded the newest version of The Lords of Sargoff. For those interested in reading it, you can download it in the following formats:

• PDF [one combined file]
• DOC [one combined file]
• DOC [chapters in separate files]

For those up to the challenge of reading it, I hope you will give me honest and brutal feedback on what you thought of it. I am looking for any and all such things:

• Grammar and spelling errors
• Plot holes (things don't make sense storywise - big or small)
• Sections that don't flow, or don't seem to fit - sections of bad writing :)
• People and places that have dumb names (or names that don't fit)
• Things that are not explained enough, or explained too much
• Words that are overused
• Parts of the story that are too similar to "fantasy cliches"
  
• Anything that you think may improve the story

If this it to be someday accepted for publication, it needs to be as without flaws as possible, so hold nothing back. :)

LotD: Periodic Table of Awesoments. I'm amused that #11 doesn't have an abbreviation.